Susan Jones – Writer

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Susan Jones writes romantic drama with a touch of humour, and historical sagas as Lydia King. She lives in North Warwickshire, and loves walking through the beautiful woodlands where she lives, and gardening and reading are her pastimes.

One is lonely, two is a cosy couple, three is the magic number.  I’m talking about editing.  For maximum effect, when you’ve written a story, print it out and read it through.  Mark any parts where improvements could be made with a pencil, then put it to one side.  Next day, type it up with the changes and print again.  Now, as you read through this second, almost perfect story; read it slower. (This is for me as I tend to read much too fast.)  Where you take a breath, put a comma.  If it’s a long breath; a semi-colon is used.  An even longer breath: that’s the job of a colon.  Get rid of any exclamation marks, unless the person speaking is SCREAMING!  So, edit once, twice, thrice, and go on and sell that story.

I’ve entered a competition following my own advice.  Can’t believe how often I’ve typed up a story, printed it off and sent out without checking it through and editing.  I’m now remembering from this day on: the power of three.  Happy Halloweeeeen, and Happy Writing.

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6 responses to “The Power of Three.”

  1. Sally Jenkins Avatar

    I agree – you do need to read your work back SLOWLY. It’s so easy to skip words or read what you think you’ve written. I find reading aloud works best to slow me down.

  2. susanjanejones Avatar

    That’s a good idea Sally, especially with poetry. It always makes more sense when read aloud. I do get some funny looks when I’m doing the different voices though.

  3. Patsy Collins (@PatsyCollins) Avatar

    I agree that you need to leave work and come back to it later. I agree too that reading aloud is a good idea (although you’ll feel silly doing it)

  4. Gail Crane Avatar
    Gail Crane

    Oh, I like that. I shall try it next time I’m sending out a story.

  5. susanjanejones Avatar

    Hi Patsy, strange how we see the words differently when we’ve left them to one side for a day. Thanks for your comments.

  6. susanjanejones Avatar

    Hi Gail,
    I love how we’re learning all the time with writing. Each year we aim to improve don’t we? Thanks for commenting.

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