One is lonely, two is a cosy couple, three is the magic number.  I’m talking about editing.  For maximum effect, when you’ve written a story, print it out and read it through.  Mark any parts where improvements could be made with a pencil, then put it to one side.  Next day, type it up with the changes and print again.  Now, as you read through this second, almost perfect story; read it slower. (This is for me as I tend to read much too fast.)  Where you take a breath, put a comma.  If it’s a long breath; a semi-colon is used.  An even longer breath: that’s the job of a colon.  Get rid of any exclamation marks, unless the person speaking is SCREAMING!  So, edit once, twice, thrice, and go on and sell that story.

I’ve entered a competition following my own advice.  Can’t believe how often I’ve typed up a story, printed it off and sent out without checking it through and editing.  I’m now remembering from this day on: the power of three.  Happy Halloweeeeen, and Happy Writing.

6 responses

  1. Sally Jenkins Avatar

    I agree – you do need to read your work back SLOWLY. It’s so easy to skip words or read what you think you’ve written. I find reading aloud works best to slow me down.

  2. susanjanejones Avatar

    That’s a good idea Sally, especially with poetry. It always makes more sense when read aloud. I do get some funny looks when I’m doing the different voices though.

  3. Patsy Collins (@PatsyCollins) Avatar

    I agree that you need to leave work and come back to it later. I agree too that reading aloud is a good idea (although you’ll feel silly doing it)

  4. Gail Crane Avatar
    Gail Crane

    Oh, I like that. I shall try it next time I’m sending out a story.

  5. susanjanejones Avatar

    Hi Patsy, strange how we see the words differently when we’ve left them to one side for a day. Thanks for your comments.

  6. susanjanejones Avatar

    Hi Gail,
    I love how we’re learning all the time with writing. Each year we aim to improve don’t we? Thanks for commenting.

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